the idea and concept is perfect...the only thing lacking is the quality in marks. Other then that a good atempt!! Well done!

Nice idea, but still looks like concept sketch.

great idea, and the face look nice, but the arms are not proportion properly.

I think you should practice on being consequent more often, and organise things like documentation and techniques before you start on an artwork.
You've definitely got potential.

I agree with the previous comments; great concept but the excecution is a bit lacking. Also the way you've split the text is odd. It looks like you want it to be read as "Can hide you the monster"! +4/7

Thanks all for the honest comments although they weren't all very constructive. And Artie. I don't know what kind of sketches do you make but I used something like a 10 hours to paint this "sketch", so I find that comment even a bit offensive. I'm not claiming to be pro yet. There are some mistakes in anatomy but remember that I didn't have any ref pic. I usually use some ref pics in my paintings but I think I should quit using them...

..but oh well, it's always good to have some feedback so thank you.

I like it. I find it difficult to critique even anatomy because everyone see's something 'differently' to someone else. I don't think art should be about the 'perfect' body shape and structure, but an artist's interpretation of them.

Thats just my humble opinion though. To each their own

I think her face is great, and I love the paint technique you have used. It's nice to see something a bit different.